Here is this week's query letter. Let's help each other hone our query skills by leaving your thoughts and suggestions in the comments. (I've already got the discussion started, don't leave me hangin'!)
Dear Editor X,
As a writer and a mother, intellectual freedom, especially in print, is very important to me. This year I will be actively teaching my eldest child, a nine year old, about banned books. There is a great amount of educational information available, even at this age range.
I'm writing to propose to you a 3,500 feature piece: "Banned Books and Your Child, Start Intellectual Freedom Now." This piece is aimed at a young, progressive mother to children age 8-15, and should dovetail nicely with Banned Books Week (beginning September 27 and lasting through October).
This piece would cover the following, with call outs and quotes noted:
(Article outline/bullets here. Removed by writer's request.)
Editors, I am a professional freelancer with over 12 years of writing experience. My current clients include X, X, and Y. I have also written for Z, from which I am sending two clips (attached).
I offer only professional work, tight deadlines and open communication. Let's get to work!
Signed, Ms. B.